Quick Will Drawing

[Moonythoughts]

I'm not sure about this one. I know how critical you all can be about how you view the characters, and since I don't have the clearest image of the HDM characters in my head, I'm never sure about what you'll say. I'd still like feedback, though! This took about twenty minutes. If you have any scene in particular that you'd like me to draw, don't hesitate to ask!

Here:

[ArcT]

That's very very good. Done on GIMP at all?

I love it. It shows he's tired, aged beyond his years, and he looks as if he has the weight he bears on his shoulders. I'm very impressed. Good job

[Asha]

QUICK???

Yeah, I love Gimp. If I could use it.

[fairydust]

if that's a quick drawing, i would LOVE to see a slow drawing..

[Rene]

Me too.

It's so detailed with the shadings of the hair.

I wonder how you would draw a mulefa?

[Anna Mnemi]

I love it. I've been looking for a good picture of Will for ages (I print fanart off and put it on my bedroom wall, and Will is somewhat unrepresented).

[Lari]

I love that drawing! I think it´s very similar to the way I´ve always imagined Will, so, congrats!

[Cephaler]

1. He's too thin.

2. He looks dejected, I don't see any weight of determination around him.

3. Will should look like one demanding your respect.

[Miss_Parker]

He doesn't exactly demand respect in the beginning of TSK.

4. Good job

[Ryan]

1. He's too thin.

2. He looks dejected, I don't see any weight of determination around him.

3. Will should look like one demanding your respect.

I think it's a really good drawing. Like MP said, this is exactly Will from the start of TSK.

[Mahogany]

That's a great drawing. Looks like he has just left his mum and is on the way to Oxford...

[Abby]

Wow! That's really, really good! Love it!

[Cephaler]

He's not stout looking. It's in the books. Will should look strong physically. I imagined him differently.

[Moonythoughts]

Thanks to all for your reviews - they really make my day!!! I will try to draw something a little more complex soon, but it may take a while. Again, thanks, everyone who replied.

[Croatina]

You made that quick? I wouldn´t manage to do it in days! It´s great by the way: the way you have captioned him.
But there is just one thing: he could have looked a little bit more determind. Cause I´ve always seen him as it...

[LowProfile]

1. He's too thin.

2. He looks dejected, I don't see any weight of determination around him.

3. Will should look like one demanding your respect.

4. Good job

5. handsome

[ArcT]

Stoppit!

[LowProfile]

Stoppit!

no need to be angry

[Tobuoi]

That's about what I imagined him to look like. The facial features are very nice. And the lips. Mmmmm. Yes.

[Shelby]

I think this is an excellent representation of Will at the beginning of TSK. He's nervous and unsure, captured perfectly in the expression. Remember, the "murder" he committed weighs very heavily on his mind at that point, as does his sense of responsibility and worry for his mother. The only thing I'd change is I'd like to see him a bit more broad-shouldered.

I'd love to see your interpretation of the scene on the Torre degli Angeli, which is where I feel that Will really sheds his former skin and comes into his own to fulfill his (and Lyra's) destiny.

I would also love to see your interpretation of Will at the end of the book, after his transformation from all that he went through. So I guess I'd like three Wills--this one, his turning point in Cittagazze, and his maturation at the end.

Great job!

[Ferociter]

you did that quickly? if i tried for a billion years i wouldnt do that well.

he looks kind of sad, but determined in that strong way only children are capable of.

[fbi_woman]

omg, that looks fantastic!

[timlossev]

GREAT work, thanks!

[bloodfang]

I do not like it that much and its freedom of speech what I am saying.

[ArcT]

Why don't you like it? Not that it's wrong not to, but critique generally includes reasons as to why you have your opinion